天使の物語 (Tale of an Angel)

Isabella, an orphan suffers through tough times to finally get a home to sleep. and struggles for a better life when she meets a teenage boy who takes care of her and they fall in love. This heart-warming story I made. (It literally just came to me from watching annie and moetan 2) P.S. the cover is moetan 2 but the story is not moetan. Trust me.

Anyway. Tell me in the comments how good of a job or improvements I could make on this book. Thanks-Keyshawn