"Flowers were adorned on the hall before him, jutting from the stone crafted corridor in all directions. So bright they were, that there wasn't need for torches, and they lit the path in a green glow. What this place was he did not know, he felt if this all had been a dream.
A dream... if only it were he thought to himself. If only he wasn't chosen to save Rhi'oron, maybe he would still be home. Yet, then he would be dead like all the rest, perhaps it would have been better that way, to die at Elane's side. All these went through his head as he walked to the ending of the corridor. The maw of his eye grew, as he gazed at a being sitting in the center of crumbling ruin, under the mid-night sky. Andir suddenly felt as if he were to finally learn what has happened to the world, in all the terrible things that had happened. "
A story of which nine friends gather together to learn the ancient histories behind a terrible creature, that has plagued the world for the last ten years. Carrying along with them the burden of war, soon they would see... that the world may just be beyond saving.
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BaconRequiem Joined: May-11-2009 |
I got nothing to say, except that I've been writing for quite awhile, and numerous people say i'm good at it. Eh, i just enjoy it, but i hope you all enjoy it more. But you won't will you, you jerks.
If i don't update this within three days, you can bet all your monies on me writing it in a documented format, instead of on here.
Also you may have noticed in the exert above, that one: it is very far ahead in the story and that two: in the second paragraph, it says "the maw of his eye" when you may think it should say "eyes". I put eye because the due fact that Andir has but one eye, and the other is glass.
One last thing, ever single character has a very large background, three other books i plan to write are solely on these characters pasts, so as you can well imagine most of their history will only be in my head and not in the books pages, due to their vast size.
(I try and update this everyday, and i spell check very little, so you'll probably see quite a few mistakes until i fix them. I hope you enjoy reading this as much as i enjoy writing it.)
