Sofie is a pink girl bear who loves to dress up like a princess and wear a crown to school. She is apprehensive about starting Kindergarten, so she makes up some imaginary friends to take to school, called the Pock Pocks. The Pock Pocks help her cope with being in a new classroom.
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Ruth Charlton Joined: Apr-14-2013 |
Ruth Charlton is an urban educator in the city of Detroit. She is 42 years old and has a Masters Degree in Education. She loves children's literature and has always dreamed of writing a childrens book for her students.
So I have 77 reads. I know 20 of those are mine, but whoever else is reading the book can you please give me your honest opinion so I can improve my writing style. Thanks so much.
If there are no more suggestions or ideas for the book, I will publish it tomorrow and start ordering copies.
Thanks,
Ruth Charlton
Please read it and let me know how I can improve the story. Because once I hit publish, I can't make changes.
