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sixth8 Joined: Dec-02-2011 |
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 | Dec-12-2011 10:53 TeacherBarclay | I don't understand how the math is evident in the title and the story. What does it all mean? Remember that you are writing this book for children. The brothers either need to be younger or they need to be a father and his two sons. Check grammar, punctuation, spellling, capitalization and sentence structure. Where are the images? Whre is the theme? |
