This book is about a girl named Blaze and all the secrets she finds out about her family. Her brother Nat went to a party and didn't come back. Blaze goes out to find him. On her way she goes through a lot of weird things. Will she ever find her brother?.....
Lets be real I started writing this when I was 11 years old. I didn't have many friends so I turned to writing. Honestly the storyline is great but the grammar and spelling errors are atrocious. I also cannot figure out how to edit it. I think that it is worth the read and also maybe use it in a classroom and have your students correct my awful grammar and spelling. All day long students are shown perfect books but they never get to see the mistakes made along the way.This away they can read a pretty good story and realize it is okay to make mistakes and here is how you can fix them. It will also show all the different ways people change the grammar. Let me know by commenting if this meant anything to you or if read this at all
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Abigail Kidd Joined: Apr-22-2010 |
I had just read the book Lunch Money and all of the sudden i felt like writing. So I did. Now this book is one of my many I hope to create. thanks so much for reading!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
