Aelise Teronne used to be an assassin working for the Kandu Law Enforcement. She was in the Wolf level of assassins, a collection of highly skilled and trained superhumans who were programmed into killing everyone they were told to. Aelise did that, but the programmed computer chip proved faulty, and she could resist the orders from the chip . . . only after killing everyone she could, and throwing her world into chaos. Now there's only one thing on her mind, to destroy her enemy. Her enemy who controlled her and made her their slave. Escaping from the KLE (Kandu Law Enforcement) was an easy task after her mind no longer belonged to them, and she goes out to set things right, kill someone one last time, and make up for what she had already done. Twisting herself into a complicated tangle of allies, danger, family, love, insanity, and self-doubt, she learns to treat herself not as a once violent assassin, but a changing person.
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Karai Silvergirl Joined: Nov-26-2011 |
I am: a writer, a reader, a singer, a swimmer. A creator, a maker, a go to bed late-er. An artist, a dreamer, a coffee with creamer; a poet, a know-it, a low-lit . . . old light bulb. I am: an explorer . . . who's border . . . is way past the sky.
I am escaping.
Please, if you decide to read one of my humble books, read Stolen or 0:00:00:01
Thank you!!
Hi. Let me introduce myself. My name is Luann Jung, I turned 11 this year on March 25. I'm about 5'2. This August I will go to middle school-it starts at 7th grade here. I'm Asian but born in the USA. I have a dog and two cats, although I've had 11 pets in my lifetime. I spend lots of time on the computer; writing, reading, and exploring. I love digital art and technology in general. I hope you enjoy my books as much as I do . . . have a nice day.
My e-mail:
lollyluann@gmail.com
This is a novelette (7500 - 17500 words) that WILL be finished. It is for my Gifted 9-Week Project, so basically homework. I also plan to enter it in emalimabean's contest! PLEASE READ AND COMMENT, I would be really happy if you did!! Thank you!!
 | Jul-18-2013 15:47 Anika | "Take a look on the inside of the mind of a former assassin. You'd expect to find three things on their mind-kill, never doubt, show no emotion. This is true for main character Aelise...at least it was. When you step inside her mind, you're only aware of her self doubt, humility and revenge. Readers come to know that people are capable of change, whether it's a life or death experience, or if it's simply due to a faulty chip-sometimes that's all it takes. Readers will also learn that the 'Underside' of being an assassin, is reality." Anika Dunbar Author of the 'Elements of Time' saga If you want me to change anything, let me know!^-^ |
 | Mar-06-2013 11:28 ❤ѕєхчu∂υ�.. | Amazing storyline. I can't believe you can write so amazing at such a young age <3 I love reading your books! ❤Sexydubsteplover❤ |
 | Feb-03-2013 06:19 emohottie2001 | i can't beLIEVE that u r only eleven. this is enchanting! oh, yeah...i'm new here. |
 | Jan-16-2013 07:57 sabjoste | This is AWESOME!!! |
 | Jan-03-2013 12:35 ♥HiddenPoet♥ | Congrats on publishing this book! |
 | Jan-03-2013 06:55 Summer | Congrats on publishing this novellette! It looks awesome! |
 | Jan-02-2013 19:41 PassionSurfer | Uh-MAZE-ing job! <3 You are such a talented writer! |
 | Jan-02-2013 19:15 Karai Silvergirl | FINISHED EDITING!!! |
| Jan-02-2013 17:48 Karai Silvergirl | YES!! I'm halfway done editing!! I AM DETERMINED TO FINISH THIS!! Meanwhile . . . is anyone up to helping me by reading this and pointing out any mistakes or inconsistencies? Thanks in advance! |
 | Dec-22-2012 09:56 Writer of Ooo | It so good!! Please finish editing. I am so happy. |
| Dec-08-2012 14:13 Summer | Wow! I love your cover so much and the idea behind this story is awesome! Great work :D |
 | Nov-19-2012 14:18 Kantor | excellent cover friend! |
| Nov-18-2012 06:01 Writer of Ooo | Another update. |
| Nov-17-2012 12:40 Writer of Ooo | Maybe |
| Nov-17-2012 12:40 Writer of Ooo | Me too. |
 | Nov-17-2012 09:58 Bella Ocean | I'm buying it. XD |
| Nov-17-2012 08:03 Karai Silvergirl | Haha, yeah. I finally got around to editing it so that I can publish! |
| Nov-17-2012 08:02 Writer of Ooo | Whoa, it's updated |
 | Nov-07-2012 14:01 Tiffany_Glinning | I enjoyed your novelette and your ending was perfect for this story. Your writing skills are great and you are a very talented author! I can't wait to read other books/stories you have to offer. If you mind, I was wondering if you could follow this link, your opinion of my book (I only had uploaded the first chapter): http://www.bookemon.com/book-profile/where-it-began/230930 |
| Nov-05-2012 14:59 Writer of Ooo | Please publish. |
| Oct-30-2012 18:58 Bella Ocean | Omigosh! I ADORE this book! It makes me feel as if I'm actually watching this happen-keep it up! Or suffer my wrath of unhappiness...;D |
| Oct-24-2012 17:45 Karai Silvergirl | Sorry! Haven't been writing/editing in such a long time. will probably publish soon! |
| Oct-24-2012 17:21 Writer of Ooo | When is it gonna be published? |
 | Oct-16-2012 14:28 Moviestar Vampire | really good book! love it! |
| Oct-16-2012 14:26 Moviestar Vampire | i love the cover!!!! its sooo coooool!!!!! i like what you did with the titel! |
 | Oct-15-2012 17:34 ☺weirdo-1☺ | If you publish it before the bookemon contest ends, I'll defnintely vote!:) |
| Oct-15-2012 15:43 Writer of Ooo | I'm almost dead because it's not published yet. It's still awesome though |
| Oct-11-2012 18:31 ♥HiddenPoet♥ | Btw: I like the wolf cover, like weirdo-1 ;-) |
| Oct-11-2012 18:30 ♥HiddenPoet♥ | L<3ve it! Very unique!! |
| Oct-09-2012 17:26 Karai Silvergirl | Thank you!! It actually is done, and I could publish it, but i have a few minor details to edit out and i wouldn't win the contest anyways . .. |
| Oct-09-2012 15:01 Writer of Ooo | If it was published. |
| Oct-09-2012 15:00 Writer of Ooo | I love this book. The cover is awesome, the story is awesome, and much more! I vote. |
| Oct-08-2012 16:37 ☺weirdo-1☺ | For the cover-voting thing, I think you should use the second cover, the one with the wolf. It's really cool;) |
| Oct-02-2012 12:01 Karai Silvergirl | OMG thank you!!! I really appreciate everything you guys have said so far, thank you so much! |
 | Oct-02-2012 09:00 Fantastic1014 | You always come up with the cooliest ideas! Your probably one of my favorite authors on here |
 | Sep-29-2012 15:11 Misty ShadowWitch | Wow you wrote alot!! I'm gonna go read more now!! KEEP IT UP!! |
| Sep-25-2012 15:28 ☺weirdo-1☺ | Wow, this is awesome!!:D I love the idea, I've honestly never read a book like this before:) |
 | Sep-17-2012 08:50 emalimabean | I can't wait to read the whole thing when you submit it! |
| Sep-15-2012 07:16 ♥HiddenPoet♥ | Cool! |
